In nobody’s domain
She runs and walks in circles
Wasted attempt to focus
Upon just what she sees.
She loses control
And the power of her mind
Gives her these exasperating thoughts,
Undesired presents
From a shattered heart.
Lies on the wet sand
Trying to find answers
Up in the sky
Or at least, blankness
Absolute obliviousness.
The insistent,
Exhausting brainwork
Makes her give up,
So tears flow from her eyes
And groans from her mouth…
A moment relief materializes.
© Dulce..........................................................................................................................Devianart image
17 comments:
Desperating. Absolutely desperating. I know the feeling.
Thanks for your comment dear Sylvia
Sometimes thinking too much can make us lose control.
Hi Dulce..... I found your nice comment on my Blog and followed you here!!! Thank you so much! Now I'm following you permanently.... I love your poet's journal and the accompanying images....
My sort of Blog!!!
Cheers...
Hi Dulce.... I looked back through your older posts and I found my painting there..... I am so honoured, thank you.
Please feel free to use any of my works.... I'm just so pleased they fit in with your thoughts and words here.
I think we are really just coming from the same place!!
My very kindest regards...
Such emotion, your writing is so heartfelt, Such a great talent :)
Roan.
She loses control
And the power of her mind
Gives her these exasperating thoughts,
Undesired presents
From a shattered heart.
I can truly relate to this...
Wonderful work.
Hugs,
Sue
Oh my friends... You are great. To me these comments are like food to the starving!!!
i like it. thumbs up.
~Silver
yep. and i did notice the profile pic change too ;)nice 2.
~Silver
Oh my--this is "crying time" for real...
Only God's calm and peacefulness and love can overcome.
Tears cleanse my soul!
Love this!
Margie:)
D-sometimes it seems that tears and groans are all that get us by. nicely told, once more~rick
you know, tears can bring such relief yet we try so hard to keep them in!! why, I wonder.
I can understand this poem better than I'd like. Losing love just makes everything hard. :-(
I when have the time or take the time for myself find myself back at your blog. It gives me a warm mellowed feeling reading this one is also wonderful.
Lies on wet sand, trying to find answers.
Oh how many times i feel I have been there done that, I call it having a Brain Fart.,. sorry lol its my way of venting..
Great work.. Cannot wait to read more.. SMILES
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